Well I fived it becuase I hate the people here and I think this is something that would annoy the hell out of them because they can't pay attention to a screen for more then a few seconds unless someone is screaming obscenities or hacking eachother to pieces. Very good job for your first flash. I would suggest you steer clear of gradients in the future though. You used them well but it's easy to rely on them too much later on.

Don't obsess over scores. They are meaningless. I would of quit flash years ago if I let my "ratings" take priority.